Kellan couldn’t help looking down at Jaran’s torso. He had nice calves and powerful thighs that disappeared into a pair of shorts that showed off his nice package.
“Like what you see?”
Kellan quickly looked away so Jaran wouldn’t know he’d been ogling him. “Come on let’s go inside. “ He turned around to leave the hold. ''
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very descriptive. well done
ReplyDeleteI like fishing :D. And I love this snippet. It's captured the instant attraction between your characters. YUM!
ReplyDeleteNicely done!!!
ReplyDeleteI think he noticed her looking! LOL good job!
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