Wednesday, February 1, 2012

Wednesday Briefs #4

Wednesday Briefs #4

It's that time of week again.  I couldn't resist using food in my story, erotically of course.   I hope you enjoy (and maybe get inspired too)    The links to my fellow writers appear at the end of my story


This weeks prompts: 

Use food in an erotic manner or

Use sims, emu and gratuity or

“I get records on my fingers and I just can’t stop.”  Or (courtesy of my daughter Sarah)

Use some sort of dance

Smooth and creamy by Lily Sawyer

Cosmopolitan Magazine wasn’t the typical publication you’d find Ben Meyers perusing, but it was the only periodical,  besides Woman’s Day or Redbook, that was sitting in the doctor’s waiting room.

The article that caught his eye was “How to Keep the Fire Burning in your Relationship.”  Ben flipped through the pages.  Tom was the love of his life. Their four years together had been happy ones. Sure, there were some bumps in the road—every couple had those.

“Sometimes even the best relationships need some spark put back into them.”

The article spoke about getting into ruts, making sure the lines of communication were open; the last part talked about having a healthy sex life.

“Mr. Meyers, the doctor is ready to see you.”

“Oh, yeah, okay.”  Ben quickly put the magazine down as though it had burned him, and followed the nurse into the exam room.

He couldn’t keep his mind off the article and when he went home, he decided that he and Tom were going to spice things up. Today was Tom’s last day of his shift.

* * * *

“Oh man, what a day.” Tom opened the front door and dragged himself across the threshold. He was bone tired and was looking forward to hugging Ben and then hitting the sheets.


“I’m in the bedroom.”

Tom wandered into the bedroom and into the walk-in closet.  “What a day I had, we must have gone on about a dozen rescues.   Most of them were just minor stuff.  Then we had this garage that caught on fire, took us a while to put the darn thing out.”  He talked as he took off his shirt and pants.  “I’m beat, I hope you don’t mind if I take a nap before dinner…. HOLY COW!”   Tom’s mouth dropped open when he looked at Ben on their bed.

Ben was lying on the bed, naked, strategically covered by fruit—mounds of strawberries, and a big banana that stuck up where his cock was hidden, completed the erotic scene.    On the nightstand were a bowl of dark chocolate and a can of whipped cream.

“What’s this about?”   Tom sat on the bed; seeing his lover had gone to so much trouble, he took a strawberry, dipped it in chocolate and took a bite, then shared the rest with Ben.

“Mm, I got the idea from Cosmo magazine.”

“Since when do you read Cosmo?”

“Since there was nothing else to read at the doctor’s office.”

“How’dyour visit go?”

“Everything’s fine, just my cholesterol is kind of high. He advised me to start eating healthier.”

Tom laughed, “And you decided this was how you were going to start?”

“I hope you don’t think this is silly.”  Ben blushed.

“No, honey, no.”  Tom leaned over and kissed his man.  “I love surprises.”

“There was this article in the magazine that said how to put the spice back into your relationship.   One of the things they listed was using food in sexy ways.  I thought I couldn’t get any more sexier than this.”

“I do say that this…” He touched the banana. “…does not represent the real you.”  Tom dug down past the strawberries and pulled up the real thing.  Ben’s cock wasn’t staying flaccid for long.   Tom picked up the bowl and slowly drizzled the chocolate all over Ben’s cock and began sucking it.

“Tom!”  Ben’s body writhed on the bed.  Tom pushed the strawberries out of his way so he could see his entire lover. 

“I found something I want to eat right now.”  Ben pulled his legs up so Tom could have access to his pulsing hole. 

“Beautiful.”  Tom wasted no time, settling between Ben’s legs and pulling apart his butt cheeks, his tongue diving in for a feast.  Every time his tongue lapped against Ben’s hole, he squirmed off the mattress.  Tom had to hold down his hips to keep him still.

“Tom,”   Ben begged.  

“You want this?”  Ben held up the banana.

“No, not big enough, need this.”   Ben put his hand on the bulge in Tom’s boxers.   Tom quickly discarded them and grabbed a tube of lube and slicked himself up.   He positioned his cock at Ben’s hole as Ben wrapped his legs around Tom’s waist, his heels pushing against his backside.  “Come on, I need you.”

“Yeah, baby.”  Tom pushed all the way in and started to thrust, his strong hips pushing in and out of his lover’s body.  It wasn’t long before he felt his balls tighten and he came. 

“That was so good.”  Ben picked up a strawberry, dipped it in chocolate and put some whipped cream on it.  And offered it to Tom.

“Aw, we didn’t use the whipped cream.”  He settled down next to Ben and chomped on the berry.

“Don’t worry, it won’t go to waste.”   Ben picked up the can of whipped cream and covered Tom’s nipples with it and started to lick it off. 

“Round two coming up.”


List of my fellow briefers

Sara York     m/m
AJ Jarrett   m/m
Nephylim    m/m
LM Brown   m/m
RC Donitz   m/f


  1. Interesting. It seemed a little bit of words, small on emotion or senses. I'd like to have gotten a taste of the strawberries, or feel the sensation of the dripping chocolate-something to that line. Sex is so much more sensual to a reader when we get the scene from the character's senses. This was hot, though.

    1. *big* on words, not bit on words. Sorry. Oh, can I say how much I enjoyed Catch of the Day? Great story. I didn't put the two together for a bit til I saw the cover.

  2. I loved the story. It was fun. Great use of the banana. I love strawberries and I could just about taste the sweetness. It's surprising what you can pick up in a doctor's waiting room

  3. Good use of food. Cant wait for the next installment.

  4. Thanks guys, and thanks Cia I will try to work on more description next time